Yeh kaisi barish hai,
Jo horahi hai aaj,
Bina sawan k mahine ke,
Yeh baras rahe hai aaj.
Koi to pyaar mein roya hoga,
Kisi ka dil tadpa hoga aaj,
Ki bin mausam badal hai barsa,
Kisi k khaab bekhre honge aaj.
Yeh kaisi barish hai,
Jo horahi hai aaj,
Bina sawan k mahine ke,
Yeh baras rahe hai aaj.
Koi to pyaar mein khoya hoga,
Kisi ko purani mohobbat yaad aaya hoga aaj,
Ki bin mausam badal hai garja,
Kisi k sapne tute honge aaj.
Yeh kaisi barish hai,
Jo horaha hai aaj,
Bina sawan k mahine ke,
Yeh baras rahe hai aaj.
Kai to ankhe royi hongi,
Kitno ke ishq adhure hue honge aaj,
Ki bin mausam badal hai barsa,
Kitno ka khuda rutha hoga aaj.
Yeh kaisi barish hai,
Jo horaha hai aaj,
Bina sawan k mahine ke,
Yeh baras rahe hai aaj.
hi, your poem is amazing. I’ve just written one in hindi, and was wondering could you take a look and tell me if the hindi is okay? I’m not a native speaker, just a girl who watches a lot of bollywood movies: https://confessionsofabengali.wordpress.com/2015/03/22/maat-kar-mujeh-dosti/
thank you!
Thankyou so much…dear. am glad you liked them and am still learning to improve. i will surely read your post.
pls do keep visiting. have a grt day ahead.
god bless,
jyoti.