The art of loneliness,

The evoke of the emotionless mask,

I was living a life with silence,

All dead and in the dark.


You came like a sword,

Destroying all the sadness in me,

Making me alive and living.

You met me coincidentally,

Or it was planned by the almighty…

You and me became one in no time,

As it was all scripted by the destiny…


Like a fresh rising light,

You brightening my life,

Like a pure water devoted,

You washing away my ashen soul.

The fear to fall again,

The fear to get betrayed,

The fear of losing you indeed,

Is all that I pray never come true.


You seem to be an ANGLE,

Sent from the heaven,

Shedding away all my sorrows,

DESTINY is just a name carved by god,

Given to the person like you, my Love.

YOU call it DESTINY,

I call it meant to be,

But for US, It should be called only “YOU AND ME”

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. adarsh shetty says:

    Just awesome…
    Really liked it..


  2. Sayani says:

    Splendid and just it touched my heart, great poem so filled with emotions.


    1. jyoti7208 says:

      its really pleasing your feeling the emotions while reading… god bless… 🙂


  3. pooja iyer says:

    Touched my heart..
    wonderfully written..


    1. jyoti7208 says:

      M happy to know that u liked it…


  4. Ashwini hemmady says:

    Fully carved with of the best poem…


    1. jyoti7208 says:

      just said what i felt…


  5. Annu rai says:

    I loved this poem…awesome….


    1. jyoti7208 says:

      my pleasure..


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