“You and me in rain”

You and me stood beside each other,

Speaking, understanding.

I looked at the sea and their waves rather,

The flow so wild and still they manage to touch the shore,

The cold breeze till than continued blowing my hair.










Few last days issues, you tried to explain,

But i was hurt which stopped me to agree.

You told, shouted or blamed at my ignorance,

My tears which was hidden, started to spill out.









The fear of staying far from you and the pain with it,

The fear of long distance relationship,

Which made me miss you more these days.

I cried and cried hard enough for him to hear,

And feel my love and pain with the fear.








With my tears the black clouds accompanied,

The winds blew high and water poured from up the sky.

You walked towards me and held my hand,

As if you will never stay apart and far.









Your touch made me relax and pour my emotions freely,

With all the tears in eyes,

Your arms around helped me heel.

As you took me in your arms,

The drizzling started along with it the heavy rain.

No time and it all made us wet,

You shivered with cold,

I tried to keep you warm by my presence.









Suddenly, everything felt heaven and nature calmed my fear,

I got lost in your care and love once again,

With it once again a hope raised to live love strong and bold.

I never realized your wet lips on mine,

The sensational feel made me loosen up from that while.

So passionately we got into it and didn’t realized.










Within few seconds, the heavy rain made us come in real,

We looked into each other’s eyes and smile made everything cleared.

We drove back from the sea-shore than,

The ride in the rain,

Is more than just fun.







The drops making us more wet,

But there was no one than,

Who could stop us from being in LOVE…

Indeed “YOU and ME in RAIN”

Such a wonderful experience!!!!






4 Comments Add yours

  1. Your writings always fit so beautifully with the pictures you add!!


    1. jyoti7208 says:

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      it feels great you liked it..
      thats the main motto behind..
      thankyou…and pls do welcome..


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    1. jyoti7208 says:

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