Some part of me is getting lost…


Some part of me is getting lost..
Some part of me is falling apart.

Getting lost within me….

Some part of me is getting ruined.
Some part of me is asking for divine.
My eyes have lost the water within it.
My lips are fighting to smile.
My ears have lost the sense of sound.
My soul is slowly losing me.
Don’t know till when i will stand.
Don’t know till when i will not depart.
I can sense now my hollowness within.
And getting deeper and deeper without you.
I am getting lost within the dark, within the emptiness with me..
But still i wanna feel for the last time…the love you have…
So you will not have to regret when i will be not there…
And will be lost forever…..

19 Comments Add yours

  1. zygerina says:

    Felt it beautifully aching!

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    1. jyoti7208 says:

      Thanks dear
      Thankyou for commenting on my post..
      I hope you liked it..

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  2. zygerina says:

    I surely did , my pleasure!

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  3. dilipnaidu says:

    Jyoti there is much poignancy and soul in your words! The spontaneity is so compelling too.
    Be well.
    Dilip

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    1. jyoti7208 says:

      Thankyou so much to go thrg my blog on the first part..
      and i am glad that you liked and taken efforts to state ur emotions on words for me and my post.. thankyou…
      jyoti

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  4. If only we can find that tiny crack & the hint of a tiny light to suction us up from out of the deepness. Your words…I can feel…each of them. Thank you for expressing from within!

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    1. jyoti7208 says:

      Thankyou so much for your comment dear.. and your welcome to my page and site..
      i really envy you for ur words..

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  5. Thank YOU! You are my first friend here & I shall read all you share, so…write on! *smiles*

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    1. jyoti7208 says:

      and so as i will… thankyou and always welcome…

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  6. onlinefunland says:

    Sad, Deep, Felt through the soul…so imressive !

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    1. jyoti7208 says:

      Words make it true meaning and become more valuable when new people like you feels the actual form of the post..
      Thankyou..

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      1. onlinefunland says:

        I love your poems – Indeed !

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      2. onlinefunland says:

        If you write your special thoughts about your reblogged post there, I’ll really feel honored …

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  7. onlinefunland says:

    Reblogged this on onlinefunland.

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    1. jyoti7208 says:

      i feel warmed by your comment about me and my blog..really adoring…
      i didnt get u wat u told in ur last comment, pls be clear…

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      1. onlinefunland says:

        I reblogged your two poems (http://onlinefunland.wordpress.com/2012/07/11/1608/, https://onlinefunland.wordpress.com/2012/07/11/1603/), I want you to write something about these poems on my blog, ..eg.Your inspirations and thoughts behind writing these poems .
        I think its much clear now 😀
        Have a lovely day !

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      2. jyoti7208 says:

        ya ya sure…i gt it..il surely do it…and thanks buddy for your so much so liking and words… pls do visit again…

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  8. rodyarask says:

    so beautiful !

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    1. jyoti7208 says:

      Thanks my friend…
      Thank you for ur words and ur valuable like..
      be feel to speak anything abt this blogs and i will honer ur suggestions too..

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